Animation Appreciation Thread #9

The Sakuga Wiki [JP] - http://www18.atwiki.jp/sakuga/
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Previous threads:
#1 http://dis.4chan.org/read/anime/1291816034 | #2 http://dis.4chan.org/read/anime/1314681601
#3 http://dis.4chan.org/read/anime/1325612276 | #4 http://dis.4chan.org/read/anime/1336754773
#5 http://dis.4chan.org/read/anime/1346337747 | #6 http://dis.4chan.org/read/anime/1349463339
#7 http://dis.4chan.org/read/anime/1350859696 | #8 http://dis.4chan.org/read/anime/1353020474

>>775
but as a whole, the scene doesn't seem to work very well because of the storyboarding or editting or whatever.

I don't get this, what is wrong with it? There are not jarring cuts(as in scene transitions that don't make sense) nor are there any shots where we can't see anything, there are actually several wide shots that give us a good picture of what is going on.