>>18
>You began with formal, then shifted suddenly to informal.
I see Japs do that all the time with ～ましょう when they're starting something off like that, and they switch in plenty of other situations too.
>And you mixed the present tense and the passed tense.
He used past tense once in a way which makes perfect sense. Also if you'd ever read a Japanese novel, you'd know that writers often switch tense during the course of a narrative.
Keep practising, bro.
>>19
By the way, is it just me, or are
>>18 and
>>19 the same person? Maybe I've been on 4chan so long it made me cynical about everything, but
>>18's Japanese isn't too good and I don't think there are many people in here who'd think different.