How would you format onomatopoeias - the sounds, i.e.THUD - into the middle of a dialogue, specifically one person's, or midline.
Would you:
1)keep it inside the quotes
2)give it it's own paragraph
3)stop the quotations around it
Serious help is appreciated.
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Anonymous2005-10-04 2:52
2nd option
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Anonymous2005-10-05 9:01
depends on the specific situation
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Anonymous2005-10-05 21:13
Harold slogged out of the tub with a certain charming amount of lethargy only to be rewarded with a curious sliding sensation between his buttocks...
~ssssssssssssplortch~
"Oh my... I seem to have prolapsed..."
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Anonymous2005-10-06 12:29
Perhaps like this:
Harold slogged out of the tub with a certain charming amount of lethargy only to be rewarded with a curious sliding sensation between his buttocks and a splortch to accompany it.
"Oh my... I seem to have prolapsed..."
Something like that if you want it in official/formal english. Personally I think the way you've done it is fine.
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Anonymous2005-11-22 15:39
>>4
A prime example of what never to do under any circumstances.