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Writing - Onomatopoeias in Dialogue

Name: Anonymous 2005-10-03 22:33

How would you format onomatopoeias - the sounds, i.e.THUD - into the middle of a dialogue, specifically one person's, or midline.

Would you:

1)keep it inside the quotes
2)give it it's own paragraph
3)stop the quotations around it

Serious help is appreciated.

Name: Anonymous 2005-10-05 21:13

Harold slogged out of the tub with a certain charming amount of lethargy only to be rewarded with a curious sliding sensation between his buttocks...

~ssssssssssssplortch~

"Oh my...  I seem to have prolapsed..."

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