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Name: VIPPER 2007-05-07 1:45

Read it again slowly moron. "Guess what" is stated in the form a question. Let me show you an example.

Ex 1

Person 1: Hey Jeff, guess what.
Person 2: What?
Person 1: That new band cd you wanted has arrived at the store.

INCORRECT

Ex 2

Person 1: Hey Jeff, guess what?
Person 2: What?
Person 1: That new band cd you wanted just arrived at the store.

CORRECT

Also you used your commas before 'and' which is not structural because commas are sometimes used to replace 'and' at points. Here's another example

Example 1

Point A, and B, and C, and D, and E.

BAD GRAMMAR

Example 2

A and B and C and D and E

Primay school crap you are taught to avoid and not use.

Example 3

Point A, B, C, D and E

Name: VIPPER 2007-05-07 2:00

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