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even very minimal music needs some kind of discernable theme or content, even if it's very slight and buried under everything else. in fact the more minimal a track is, the better its melodies have to be - if you're going to listen to one riff for 5 minutes it had better be pretty fucking good. your track has nothing. that kick drum pattern doesn't count and that synth part isn't enough to hold it together. the dissonant bass was quite interesting though.
i've heard all of those drum sounds and synth patches about a million times before. if you want to be exciting and arty, don't use presets. make your own synth patches, process your own drum sounds.
tl;dr: this track needs actual musical ideas driving it.