One Time I Saw a Ghost

Please help me by criticizing and/or categorizing my song.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Wu96sNwHhA

note: at this time parts 2 and 3 of the song are video response'd for your convenience.

cite your unoriginality
http://www.sickanimation.com/cartoon.asp?name=myyearwiththedragon