Name: Anonymous 2008-06-10 6:33
what does /lounge/ think of my poem?
Eyes sealed in the total dark of the night,
And I find myself entangled in your impassioned touch.
The tender strokes of your fingers
Brushing against my skin.
Even just the subtlest of motions
From your entrancing frame
Keeps me staggered in a thundrous spell.
The scent lingering across your lips
Enlivens me, and I'm caught up in an explosive thirst
Only quenched by this scorching kiss.
Now these tongues intertwine,
The vigor pushing to illusory heights of passion
And all with each eye tightly shut.
So sudden did light begin to push beneath my sight
And my eyelids separate to make me see,
That I've been embraced in my sheets and my own fantasies,
My arms and no one else's.
Eyes sealed in the total dark of the night,
And I find myself entangled in your impassioned touch.
The tender strokes of your fingers
Brushing against my skin.
Even just the subtlest of motions
From your entrancing frame
Keeps me staggered in a thundrous spell.
The scent lingering across your lips
Enlivens me, and I'm caught up in an explosive thirst
Only quenched by this scorching kiss.
Now these tongues intertwine,
The vigor pushing to illusory heights of passion
And all with each eye tightly shut.
So sudden did light begin to push beneath my sight
And my eyelids separate to make me see,
That I've been embraced in my sheets and my own fantasies,
My arms and no one else's.