My poem...

Hey there... I heard this was a good place to find some friends.. so I thought I would share my poem with you and you guys could tell me what you think.

I worked hard on this... please give me comments =)

Tears so near
because i lost someone so near
someone i once held very dear
It was truly one of my greatest fears
sliding the knife across my thorat skin so near
Slipping towards me it cuts so deep
leaveing my body in nothing but a heap
The blood begins to pool
surrounded by everyone in the school
Friends around me see that im dieing
while everyone else is busy dialing
the ems arrives it is just to late
with death i was very punctual with our date
all because i lost someone it cause with my life i begin to hate
slit throat bleeding profusely
all because my supposed friend decided to say screw me
fuck this life
fuck that light
this was one to many added to my plight
so instead of choosing to add to my plight
i decided to end my life
eyes shut bleeding out
my heart has finally given out
i leave this world with one last shout
fuck this world and i let the last of the love thats left in this heart

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Fail, and emo. GTFO

Hey I worked hard on it =(

omg that was beautiful

Thank you =) I have a bunch more poems on my myspace that you guys can read if you want

and failed miserably. =(

THIS. MEANS. WAR.

All anonymous to battlestations; deploy all units, CHARGE!!!

Umm... shut up.

Sorry guys... last post was me. I forgot to type in my name.

Here is a funny video I made http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.showvids&friendID=42577134&n=42577134&MyToken=71c84cc8-f256-44f1-809f-2a8e14665966

Tell me what you think

fail

BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW

lol I dont get it

GTFO artfag.

Hey what the fuck did I ever do to you. Youre the fag