poem dedicated to RedCream

Red cream, you are a fag,
i will put you in a bag
and shoot you
Red cream, you are a fag,
i will put you in a bag
and shoot you
Red cream, you are a fag,
i will put you in a bag
and shoot you
Red cream, you are a fag,
i will put you in a bag
and shoot you
Red cream, you are a fag,
i will put you in a bag
and shoot you
Red cream, you are a fag,
i will put you in a bag
and shoot you
Red cream, you are a fag,
i will put you in a bag
and shoot you
Red cream, you are a fag,
i will put you in a bag
and shoot you
Red cream, you are a fag,
i will put you in a bag
and shoot you
Red cream, you are a fag,
i will put you in a bag
and shoot you

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>>1
Thank you for your poem.  However, it lacks a certain "oomph" or liveliness.  It also has a little too much repetition.

Well, as usual, you have artistic license and may do whatever you wish.