email i sent

I just hitting my head for the stupid thing i did out of lack of confidence.. I ASKED FOR EMAIL IN STEAD OF NUMBER..EVEN THOUGH SHE Was willing to give me her NUMBER but backed out beacuse i gave her an OPT-OUT ..so basically I'm in a bind because I have to try and get her number via email whICH is very hard to do ...especially for a girl to WANT TO GIVE You over something which is very easy to ignore over -- internet.
So this is the email I Sent:
Too late to make changes , its done and sent .. Any opinions ? I MADE UP SOME BULLSHIT:

This is [FreshnSexy]. WE Met yesterday at [college] in [building] I second floor..

How did your Pre-Calculus final go ? Are you taking more classes in Summer session II ? HOw is the rest of your summer going ?
As you Know, I have a good paying Job and I am doing my masters MBA this summer... I come from a good background
I would love to talk get to you know you better Only As Friends. You sound like a really smart girl , you seem to be very science oriented ....and I feel we are common in that regards as I love chemistry etc. I just want to chat with you and get to know you better only -- nothing more than friends.
Please Give me your Phone Number, or give me a call at [555-555-5555] anytime , If you give me your number, I assure you it will be safe and it 'll be a good experience..why not give it a try...

THANKS
[FreshnSexy]
[job title]
[job website]

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rofl "It'll be a good experience, why not give it a try"

Dude that was so gay.
That's how I would do it:

This is [FreshnSexy]. WE Met yesterday at [college] in [building] I second floor..
Give me your phone number please. Do it for the lulz.

And that's all it takes! Works like a charm.

man OP you are a big fucking pussy.  That is one of the most desperate sounding emails I've seen in a long time.  It really shows when you put things in like "I would love to talk get to you know you better Only As Friends."  lawd

Take this advice from your elders:  YOU MUST MAKE IT CLEAR up-front that you DO NOT WANT to be 'just friends', you DO NOT WANT to be the pussy that wastes hours of his time listening to her bla bla bla about all her problems.  YOU ONLY WANT to put your dick into her puss, and you need to allude to this immediately upon approach.  If she's not down with spreading her legs without the bullshit, the MOVE ON IMMEDIATELY you dumb shit.

Next time, write down a piece of paper something like "you're hot.  let's hang out.  555-1212." (or use your email addy instead of the phone#.)  Odds are she will not call, but one out of every five or ten girls will, no matter what you look like.  So hit up 20 sluts this week and you might get laid twice.

Do not talk to girls more than absolutely necessary to get the job done.  She doesn't want to hear your life story, and it does more harm than good.  Teenage boys NEVER can talk their way into a girls panties, only OUT.  And DO NOT ever try to be a girl's 'friend', because it just shows her you are a desperate loser that has nothing better to waste his time on and that all the other girls won't touch with a ten foot pole.  You will NEVER get laid this way.

One last piece of advice, NEVER listen to your friend's advice about getting girls unless they are about 10 years older than you and do not have a steady 'girlfriend', because you don't want a girlfriend, you only want to get LAID.  Most men don't know a thing about how to get laid, and end up marrying one of the first few skanks that put out because they are so desperate to get laid.  You don't want to be that guy.