Depression has captured my soul.

Grace slick
ate a spider
shinging--big and black----- her eyes smiling
on a overcast sunday in san francisco
sun trying to brake thru
baking small parts and cooling the rocks on angel island
skin flakes felled from al capone long ago while he sat in alcatraz with a sly smile on his lips-- he didn't like the industrial sized can peas
eaten by sea birds---
and recycled at the bottom of the sea
sprung up as water lillies-------
surrelstic pillow
we long to sleep
on cloudy october days
oh the battle ship armada of clouds flowing out east from old wyoming
little children look up and understand

any comments on my poetry..?

>>2

When I first read your post, my thoughts were that you were in fact not human, but a chimpanzee that
had somehow managed to escape from the animal nuthouse. Upon closer inspection, I came to realize
the horrible truth. You are without exception the most pitiful and woeful example of mankind that
ever existed. You are the one who puts the 'Homo' in 'Homo sapien'. I am at a loss for words
powerful enough to describe your pathetically sub-par intellect and nealithic communication
skills, so instead you have forced me to rape and murder several small towns just to block out
the extensive amounts of trauma caused by reading your post. I can only hope that this thread
does not fall into the hands of more innocent victims, and one day, you will commit suicide in
such an horrific manner that it manages to cure some of the readers' trauma.

>>1
Wow, your "poetry" is pathetic.

>>4
NO U!

tl;dr and it makes no sense

Incredible. You are the new Snakespears.

thanks for blinding me with you shite gayetry you arseyface