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>>88
I'm not sure exactly what you want, but I'll give at it what I can.
For the first sentence, "ga" shouldn't by itself. "ikitaindesuga" would work better. Saying straight out "kirai" seems a bit harsh to me, but instead of "desu kara", "nanode" might be better. But I don't really like how it's "eigo no sensei", but at your level, I'm sure it's fine. Not sure about the need for the second comma though.
Seond sentence, I'd add "Sensei ha" to clarify, and "ni" should be "no". Something like "Sensei ha watashi no suisenjo wo kaite kuremasen".

Again, I'm not exactly sure of your situation, but I hope it won't be written in romaji