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Japanese Ask Questions Thread2
http://dis.4chan.org/read/lang/1206158123/1-40

Japanese Ask Questions Thread3
http://dis.4chan.org/read/lang/1267485093/1-40

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I have two sets of lines I've translated for this doujin that I'm really unsure about... Can anyone critique it?


http://g.e-hentai.org/s/dfb557ad25/448156-8

別に悪いようにはしないはよ
Don’t worry, I won’t hurt you.


幻想郷はどうにも久遠にすぎるから
It's just that I've been stuck in Gensoukyou almost forever.


たまにはこんな戯事もしたくなるのよ
So I like to have some fun now and then

http://g.e-hentai.org/s/28d2487791/448156-22
http://g.e-hentai.org/s/b939411672/448156-23

あんたは察しが良くて合わせてくれたけどねー
You caught on quickly, and cooperated with us, but...


こんなに惚れられて霊夢も難儀だわあ
It must be hard having someone like her fall in love with you, Reimu.


0024
でも
But...

彼女の気持ちは痛いほどわかるから
I understand all too painfully how she feels...


ねえ
Hey


アリス？
Alice?


あなたさえ良ければ
If it’s alright with you


暫くここに泊まってみない？
Do you want to sleep over for tonight?


フェアでないのは
How unfair it can feel...


ね
Right, Alice?