日本語 Japanese Ask Questions Thread 3

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Japanese Ask Questions Thread2
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"Basically, writing English essays is mostly a matter of arrangement. That is to say, organization is a more essential point than the details of the essay itself. Even if the professor can see a student's logic, even if he is able to understand it, if the structure of the essay becomes disorderly, the grade will probably fall. Because of that, you must make a simple and firm thesis statement and should focus on the the development of the structure of the essay."

「基本的に英語作文を書くのはほとんど整理することです。つまり、組織の方が作文の詳細より重要なポイントです。教授は生徒の論理を見えるにしても、完璧に理解することが出来ても、作文の組織がめちゃめちゃになったらおそらく成績が落ちる。それで簡単で頑丈な論文（テーゼ）を作らなければならなくて作文の組織の発達に集中するべきです。」