Name: Anonymous 2010-01-08 20:45
Goal sentence: "Hi Helene, how are you? About tonight, my friend told me he's going to the party around 10. Since it's close to where I live maybe we should meet at my place. So can you come over around 10? See you later."
Attempted translation: Coucou, Helene, comment ca va? Sur ce soir, mon amie me dite qu'il irait a la fete sur Dix heures. Depuis c'est proche a ou je mene peut etre nous devrait se retrouver a mon endroit! Alors peux tu venir environ dix heures? A bientot!
Please be able to explain the grammar mistakes and the correct grammar form (explain it). Please don't just post your own translation, I get very little help from that.
Attempted translation: Coucou, Helene, comment ca va? Sur ce soir, mon amie me dite qu'il irait a la fete sur Dix heures. Depuis c'est proche a ou je mene peut etre nous devrait se retrouver a mon endroit! Alors peux tu venir environ dix heures? A bientot!
Please be able to explain the grammar mistakes and the correct grammar form (explain it). Please don't just post your own translation, I get very little help from that.