Can anyone evaluate my Chinese?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tkFbN8Evh4U#GU5U2spHI

I made this about a month ago, my Chinese got better but bot very much. I know I don't sound natural in the video, it's probably because of the webcam, it's much harder to sound natural in front of a webcam and speaking to nobody than in a real conversation.

Anyway, I would like to get some feedbacks!

Thanks in advance.

Wow, your tones are pretty awesome.  You've got them down pat, great job :)  Grammar is great too.  Yea as you said, it does kind of sound unnatural, you sound like a chinese speak-and-spell xD  Try putting more dynamic/range in the tones, or something like that.  I don't even know what that means :P  Keep it up!

Also, for someone who has been learning by himself for only half a year, it really is quite spectacular.  Great job :)

omfg, awesome! As someone learning another language I'm totally ashamed after seeing this. Keep it up and you'll be able to get your hot babes in no time.