Japanese - Ask questions thread

Basically if you have a question about the language, ask it and fellow 4channers might see it and answer it for you.

To start it off. When an animate object (iru) dies, is it considered inanimate(aru)?

Asked this in /r/, but no response yet. Might aswell see if people here can give me some tips.

I pretty much gave translating hentai a try and here are a few lines I'd like to hear how accurate/decent I managed to translate. Tried to prioritize them after how well I think I managed to translate (start with those that I have no idea about)

Thanks in advance.

でもさ
<can't figure this one out>

ニャアコ　つながりっこ　するよ
Mew-girl, lets link up. <One of those sextoys to be inserted on both ends>

第壱語　幕開け
First chapter, the beginning.

部活の　作業で　連日　部室に　寝泊まり　して　いた　僕はー
I worked late everyday at the clubroom so I...

でも　この　ままじゃ　みんなに　みつかって　とんでもない　こと　に。
。。
But as it is everyone probably has noticed it...

その　格好で　みつかたら　大変　でしょう！？
With these you should blend in, don't you think?

ほらー　ゆすっちゃうぞ
Look at us! Trembling and shaking

そう　それを　いうなら　みのりちゃんの　方　だよ
Really, how can you say that in this situation?

今日　お雛祭りで　男子　登校　しちゃ　いけない　のに
Although today is the girls' (doll) festival he still went to school.

今は　共学　となり　男子生徒の　手前　日頃　閉ざされ　秘める　ことの
　多い　乙女の　部分
Before when studying with boy pupils we had to keep our feelings closed, and cover our female parts...

今日は　それを　思う存分　解放　して
Today you are free to do whatever you wish