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Name: Anonymous 2010-06-18 21:16

Name: Anonymous 2010-06-18 22:12

Looks homo

Name: Anonymous 2010-06-18 23:57

its ok

Name: Anonymous 2010-07-19 4:54

fag, stopped after first sentance

trldr bridge to terebithia fanfic

Name: Anonymous 2010-07-20 12:23

My thoughts relate to your blog design. It's offensive. Please change the colors so readers' eyes do not hurt.

Name: Anonymous 2010-07-23 11:49

sorry it gives me a headache to read text in bright colors I have updated it recently however

Name: Anonymous 2010-08-03 9:16

Name: Anonymous 2010-08-04 0:06

oh that is soooo on topic

Name: Anonymous 2010-09-14 17:23

OP, are you FUCKING NUTS? Your page is unreadable! Nobody wants to read anything in dayglow!

Name: Anonymous 2010-09-15 8:55

how bout now?

Name: Anonymous 2010-09-15 12:03

Honestly! It's better but still unreadable, the hot pink hurts to look at.

Look at http://b8a.blogspot.com for a simple fiction blog that's easy on the eyes.

Feel free to comment, it's mine.

Name: Anonymous 2010-09-15 13:40

So the #00FF00 was waht was hurting before but now the #CC00FF is hurting? BTW read the first couple posts, it is good reading. Give me a second and I'll try and fix it. I will note that I have branded myself with the purple and green across most of what I have made or revised templates, so the purple green are staying, the brightness and darkness which was a problem earlier I will try to fix. BTWA thanks for the help :).

Name: Anonymous 2010-09-15 13:53

im going to have to do it later already late for AP :(

Name: Anonymous 2010-09-15 14:05

No worries, I've used http://www.colorpicker.com/

This is the first time I wish this was an image board, I'll post a screen shot of your page on /lit/ and hope you catch it before it 404s.

I'll try to copypaste your text so I can read it comfortably. :-)

Scratch that, your current waterfall theme is very easy on the eyes, if it's your temporary template, I'd suggest keeping it.

Best of luck and keep writing!

Name: Anonymous 2010-09-15 16:10

okay i will keep the current brightnesses of colors, but make them more green and pruple as opposed to the blue and green. I am having trouble reading the selected tab so I will change that as well. BTW feel free to email me because I don't think I caught that pic.

I also am having trouble keeping up with my blog because I am worldbuilding, but I will have to upload some pics in blog posts else i won't have any posts for a good month. College is time overwhelming.

Name: Anonymous 2010-09-15 16:59

Current purple is readable! Keep in mind that any kind of dark background compromises readability and also I don't know if you have colour calibrated your monitor with a spectrometer, it's not the usual kit that people have, graphic designers use them, I can guess you tried the colour picker, I just posted a screenshot to your facebook page. Does it look the same as your blog viewed from your screen?

Name: Anonymous 2010-09-15 18:06

My screen makes it all look a little brighter. But not so bad that I should be able to read it better or worse than any others. I do a lot of work in HTML and was working off of codes that I had memorized because I like them. I am kind of fixated on the idea of greens and purples and like that I could fix the issues while still keeping them in the design.

Also feel free to read the other posts in the Writing Notes tab they all need critique harsh or otherwise because no one I know is onbjective enough to read fantasy fiction in a world I have created. I am a member of Goodreads but you have to work up a reputation to get your work read there.

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