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It's even more childlike though - I personally could not stand it.
That said, I did get through the first book and I don't dispute that it's finely written. Probably worth a look if you don't mind reading something where you clearly feel that it's been written for children.
That aside, I recommend "The Name Of The Wind" by Patrick Rothfuss. It's arguably the polar opposite of His Dark Materials on the "Harry Potter Spectrum", much darker but with a lot of similarities in the story (magic university, etc - although that's only in the first and part of the second book, but there is only the first as of now). It's no way near a knock-off however. Go google some reviews.
Also: Neal Asher, Scott Lynch, Joe Abercrombie, Charles Stross, John Scalzi, Iain M. Banks, Richard Morgan, Neal Stephenson, Steven Erikson, George R. R. Martin, Jim Butcher, Peter F. Hamilton.
You could probably read anything by the above and not be disappointed.
Google them, NOW.