Well, theres no explicit rape, mindfuck, or torture, so it's different than 99% of the loli stories on there. And a lot less extreme.
Not my cup of tea. I found the entire story discomforting and unfappable. It's better than most erotica because there is no rape or sex slavery, but I think I'll stick to lolicon when the pedophilic mood strikes and not creepy text. It just seems so odd when it's in written words. Eerie.
Whatever floats your boat VIPPER. Maybe the Anons over at /b/ will prove to be more receptive than I.
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VIPPER2011-12-27 20:53
In this grave hour fuck fuck fuck perhaps the most fateful in our history bugger shit shit.
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VIPPER2011-12-27 21:38
oh my! 0_o long time since i read that! forever not sexy though
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VIPPER2011-12-27 22:11
Let's write a letter to the writer!
Sarah
I really liked your story `The After Hours Club, Chapter 3'. Have a nice life!