Guys I made adventures in common LISP

Reddit told me this is the place to go for LISP critiques. If anybody gets a chance could they have a look at my LISP code? Outlined on my live journal here: http://untoward.livejournal.com/472662.html and here: http://untoward.livejournal.com/472344.html

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What's wrong with him? I bet he is just a regular guy. he probably plays minecraft, codes, goes to Uni, maybe a bit of boardgame.