Acoustic Singer/Songwriter

Hey all

Just wanted to leave two songs I did recently and see what you think. I have nobody to show this to, so I'd appreciate some opinions. I know my singing is bad bud I tried my best. Everything is record by myself. The drums are loops though.

http://picosong.com/FH4e/
http://picosong.com/FH4C/

it's perfectly played and recorded and it's a absolutely good pop song but i don't think it's creative at all, i could see how it could be sold and how it might get you mad pussy though

i only listened to the first one

You can also send your song to music production company to publish your music online and you will know the result : http://www.studiopros.com