Would like opinions on a song I made

Hey, I just made this today, and I kinda want opinions on it.
No, I don't know why I came to 4chan, either. I figure I'll either get good responses, or hilarious random jargon that borders on personal threats. Either is good.

.zip file (7 MB) contains 4 files, 3 .mp3 and 1 .txt
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The music part is great really.

I think you'd do better not to so obviously hide your voice with reverb since it sounds like you can sing. Also give the vocals more presence in the mix generally. The piano line also. The brass part sounds the most phoney, although it's a good melody. I'd trade the brass lines for synth any day.

If this is all self-produced then really well done. Not often there is any real talent on user submitted stuff on 4chan.

Thanks! Yeah, I did all of this yesterday, since I wasn't feeling very good and I was stuck in my room anyway. I'm not very happy with the trumpet, either, but I couldn't play the trumpet at the time because my throat let me do the vocals once or twice and then that was it.