I am creating "The love manifesto"

The first one I scrapped because I knew I could do better. Basically the manifesto is about how we are alike, what we deserve, and how we should be treated.
Please criticize my idea beforehand, so I am be prepared for critics when it goes live (well, it is going to be in text version, but you get the picture)
This is going to be done sans religion, seeings how I am not religious.
GOGOGO

You guise, srsly, just read Robert Greene's Art of Seduction, Shmuley Boteach's The Kosher Sutra, and finally Covert Persuasion by Kevin Hogan and James Speakman. From these, you can adequately become aware of what it is a woman wants, to play, to be distracted from reality within the moment, for someone to be so in tune and presently interested in her, to communicate with her, to give her unexpected gifts at unexpected times, to not be solely mindset on sex, and to compliment her when the timing is right. These are basics, but these books can easily elaborate on the states of mind of women in order to be more like them, so that they will see you more like themselves and become accepting of you.

Jesus...you guise srsly need some tutelage. :3