Name: Anonymous 2008-03-21 3:17
POETRY TIEM
"That Moment" from the book Crow??
That Moment:
When the pistol muzzle oozing blue vapour
Was lifted away
Like a cigarette lifted from an ashtray
And the only face left in the world
Lay broken
Between hands that relaxed, being too late
And the trees closed forever
And the street closed forever
And the body lay on the gravel
Of the abandoned world
Among abandoned utilities
Exposed to infinity forever
Crow had to search for something to eat.
Read poem, comment on it, if you have any ideas or notes post. I seriously need some notes actually.
Thanks
"That Moment" from the book Crow??
That Moment:
When the pistol muzzle oozing blue vapour
Was lifted away
Like a cigarette lifted from an ashtray
And the only face left in the world
Lay broken
Between hands that relaxed, being too late
And the trees closed forever
And the street closed forever
And the body lay on the gravel
Of the abandoned world
Among abandoned utilities
Exposed to infinity forever
Crow had to search for something to eat.
Read poem, comment on it, if you have any ideas or notes post. I seriously need some notes actually.
Thanks