Is this good?

In this show, I'm here and there
Coming up is a part all about me
Over you, I break and go insane
I want solutions for all my stupid pain

Well, here's the part where I'm supposed to die
Funny thing is, I didn't even try
The part everyone expects you to cry
Well, ya' don't.

Here's our very special episode
The knot tightens, we're now in sober mode
Won't see me hang but it's implied
I fuckin' hung myself and fuckin' died

Well there's the part I break my neck and die
Sad thing is, I didn't even try
The part where everyone will sit and cry
And then they stop

For a while, the spotlight was on me
But I stop recurring at season three
And people may think deeply today,
But after that, I just fade away

That was the part where they watch me die
Moving on? Well, I didn't even try
The camera fades and points to the sky
And then, the end

Fail.

fail

Fail.