An Awesome Short Story with a message

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This is an awesome, awesome story. If you guys have a fictionpress account you should leave comments but read it anyway. It's really original and well written. As far as I know it's not published but it's the best thing I've ever read on the web.

How can u put a spoiler when it tells you what happened in the first paragraph anyway? You dont make any sense. I thought it was very very good.