/lounge/ - Critique

Name: Anonymous 2006-08-03 1:56

SILLY SALLY HAD A BABY. SILLY SALLY KILLED THE BABY. NOW SILLY SALLY'S NAME IS KILLY SALLY.

Please rate the story my 9-year-old daughter wrote.

Name: Anonymous 2006-08-03 2:35

You suck. There's your critique.

Name: Anonymous 2006-08-03 4:26

How will I ever present your opinion to my child?! She'll be crushed!

Name: Anonymous 2006-08-03 4:31

stick it in her pooper to pacify her

Name: Anonymous 2006-08-03 5:09

I am certainly NOT doing what >>4 suggested.

Name: Anonymous 2006-08-03 8:26

>>5
I'll do it for u

Name: Anonymous 2006-08-03 8:43

you daughter can rhyme. she must be black. tell her to stop her education now while she's ahead.

Name: Anonymous 2006-08-03 10:34

>>6

i'll help

Name: Anonymous 2006-08-03 15:03

I will not stay in this lair of barbarity. Good day.

Name: ‌ 2009-02-03 8:46

Name: Sgt.Kabu组鑼kiman蝲⟯ 2012-05-27 13:16

>>11
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All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy
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Name: Anonymous 2012-05-27 15:46

>>11
nice dubs

Name: Anonymous 2012-05-27 16:33

>>12
Nigger.

Name: Anonymous 2012-05-29 1:32

>>13
Nigger.

Critique

1 Name: Anonymous 2006-08-03 1:56

2 Name: Anonymous 2006-08-03 2:35

3 Name: Anonymous 2006-08-03 4:26

4 Name: Anonymous 2006-08-03 4:31

5 Name: Anonymous 2006-08-03 5:09

6 Name: Anonymous 2006-08-03 8:26

7 Name: Anonymous 2006-08-03 8:43

8 Name: Anonymous 2006-08-03 10:34

9 Name: Anonymous 2006-08-03 15:03

10 Name: ‌ 2009-02-03 8:46

11 Name: Sgt.Kabu组鑼kiman蝲⟯ 2012-05-27 13:16

12 Name: Anonymous 2012-05-27 15:46

13 Name: Anonymous 2012-05-27 16:33

14 Name: Anonymous 2012-05-29 1:32