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Help anon proofread his speech-Japanese

Name: Anonymous 2011-12-13 16:41

OK,so our professor is giving us an optional extra credit oral final.It has to be 12 sentences,and it can't be simple XはYです。She said we must use four of the following:
-potential forms
-volitional forms
-a relative clause
-てから
-前に
-~ながら
-~ばよかったです
-~たら
-~て/あげる/くれる/もらう

Also we're suppose to talk about ourselves.

Name: Anonymous 2011-12-13 18:38

「私は日本語授業を取る前に何も分かりませんでした。」- correction

日本に行く飛行機だから、あそこに早く着きたいです。- this sentence doesn't make a goddamn shred of sense

仕事を見つけたら、アニメを作ろう。- awkward, not in polite form

This is pretty bad writing and you sound like the biggest weeaboo in the world. The correction of either of which I cannot accomplish.

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