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I'm writing erotic fiction- pointers plz

Name: Anonymous 2010-01-12 14:45

Handbanana got tired of raping Carl and wandered off into Reefside. "There's someone waiting for me . . .  And I'm gonna rape him." Handbanana smiled and walked off. He arrived at Tommy's house and slipped in. Conner was busy playing video games and Ethan was reading books. Kira was playing her guitar.

Handbanana looked at Tommy, who was bending over fixing a leak in the sink. "Rape time!" Handbanana leapt onto his ass and humped it fiercely. "AAAAAAAAAH!" Tommy screamed. The three Dino rangers ran into the kitchen and saw a yellow dog rape their teacher. "HELP ME!" Tommy wailed.

Conner fell down laughing his ass off. Kira squealed. Ethan just stared. "CONNER, STOP LAUGHING AND HELP ME!" Tommy howled. He ran around with Handbanana on his ass and ran outside. "HELP!" Tommy screamed as he ran around, trying to pull Handbanana off of his ass. "C'mon, boy. Stop fighting and relax. I'll take good care of you." Handbanana smiled evilly. Tommy's eyes widened. "YOU CAN TALK?!" "Yup." Handbanana ripped off Tommy's pants with his teeth and sild his cock into his asshole.

"AAAAAH!" Tommy screamed in pain. Trent walked through the woods and saw Dr.O being humped by a dog. "Dr.O? Are you into bestiality?" He questioned. "NO! HELP!" Tommy began freaking out.

"DR. O'S BEING HUMPED BY A DOG!" Screamed Conner wildly. Kira kicked him in the knee and glared at him.

"CONNER! IT'S NOT FUNNY!" Kira shrieked. "Oh my God." Ethan ran to the bushes and threw up. Tommy roared and ripped Handbanana from his butt. He then tossed Handbanana in the lake. "TAKE THAT!" Tommy did the victory dance. Kira covered her eyes. Conner laughed harder. Ethan fainted. Trent laughed.


"Oh, shit!" Tommy covered himself and ran into the house. Handbanana rose up and looked at Conner's ass. "Rape time, take two." He ran toward Conner and humped his ass. "AAAAAH!" Conner wailed. Handbanana chomped on his ass and ripped off his pants. "HELP, DR.O!' "Conner!" Tommy ran to him and glared at the dog. "STOP RAPING HIM!" Tommy kicked H.B. off. Conner sobbed into his hands as Tommy helped him up. "C'mon, you big baby." He dragged Conner into the house. "He was gonna kill me, Dr. O!" Conner babbled.

"Damn it!" Handbanana growled angrily and dashed inside. He saw Ethan lying there and licked his lips. "Dark meat, my fave." He humped Ethan savagely, waking him up. "AAAH! DR.O!" Ethan wailed in fear.
"GET OFF OF HIM!" Tommy ran in and ripped Handbanana away. "NO HUMPING!" Tommy screamed in his face. H.B. growled and kicked Tommy in the nuts. "No one tells me not to hump." Handbanana looked at Trent. "Yummy-yummy for my dicky-wicky!" He lunged himself at Trent. Kira jumped in his way and H.B. began humping her. He bit into her ass and ripped a chunk of ass meat from her

"OW!" She screamed in pain as he licked his lips.  "ENOUGH!" Kira screamed and grabbed some scissors. "What are you going to do with those?" H.B. growled. Kira kicked him off and snipped off his dick. H.B. screamed in pain and banged his skull open, letting his brains slide onto the floor.  Kira glared darkly at it.

"STUPID DOG!!" Kira roared angrily. Hayley walked in and saw Kira holding a dog's dick and a dead dog on the floor. "TOMMY!!!" Hayley roared. Tommy quickly peed in his pants. "Oh, my fucking god!" He bolted out the door and ran into the forest. "TOMMY!!!!!" Hayley shrieked. She glared at Kira. "What did you do?!" Ethan and Conner screamed and fainted. Kira went into a hysteric fit. Trent grabbed H.B.'s dick and ate it.

Hayley ran into the bathroom and vomited. Kira screamed and fainted as well. Trent shrugged and ran off to be married to Master Shake. "Shake, I love you." "Shut up and prepare to be raped." Shake slammed his dick into Trent's asshole. "OH YES!" he screamed as his lover cummed inside him. "My sexy lover." Shake french-kissed Trent. Trent moaned in bliss.

Frylock sighed and cooked Meatwad in the oven. "Frylock, I'm hot . . . " moaned Meatwad. "I KNOW! SHUT THE FUCK UP!" he screamed as he took out his jealous anger on the meat. "Damn it, Shake! I LOVE YOU! THAT TRENT IS AN ASSHOLE! HE'S NOT GOOD ENOUGH FOR YOU! EITHER HE GOES OR I GO!!" "HE'S STAYING!" Shake roared. With that, Frylock zapped Meatwad out of existence. Meatwad turned into a shriveled meat lump and died. Frylock shot himself with a shotgun and died as well.

Shake and Trent are still married and have gay sex.

Tommy became the living ape-man of Reefside and ate dogs and pants.

Kira was sent to a mental hospital and became a permanent resident there.

Conner became a spokesman against rape and has his own task force.

Ethan and Hayley married each other and had two children and they live in Angel Grove.

Carl is still tormented by Spaghetti and his raping.

H.B. became a cat and eats dicks now.

How fucking pathetic.

The end.

Name: Anonymous 2010-01-12 16:21

I really don't think you have enough vocabulary and propose style to write an erotic fiction.

Erotic fiction is all about the gentle prose combined with vivid (yet subtle and believable) imageries. It's about tucking on the strings in your reader's heart. Make your audience BELIEVE.

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