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That sounds much better.
I also didn't care much for the stupid flaws in the logic of the writer. Like the whole thing where Daemon (seriously, what the fuck sort of name is that?) takes the magical cockring thing off and kills a ton of people on that island with the ensuing shockwave. If someone's powerful enough to do that, or, say, punch a building apart, why would they follow all of the stupid social norms in the book?
Also, the fact that she names her characters like a prepubescent nerd pissed me off to no ends.
Actually, the whole novel pissed me off because it was just so terrible. It baffles me that someone would allow that book to be published.