/anime/ - Strike Witches Love is Alive and Well!

Name: Anonymous 2010-11-13 4:13

Ok, I posted this on the imageboard but I'll summarize here.
I brought up the concept of assimilation or Nueroification of an unlucky witch, turning her into a Nueroi. I started to write a fic about it, this is just the opening.

She kept firing her machine gun. The bastards were everywhere and she had to fight them back. Ostmark was already declared a lost but she couldn't just let it fall. The Neuroi had to pay, she had lost too much already. All the while her radio unit was going off in her left ear.

“Kastner! This is the Oberstgruppenführer of Karlsland's Luftwaffe, all Ostmark units are to pull back to Karlsland! This is useless and you'll only get killed!”

Jana kept ignoring the message. The brunette witch slapped in a new drum magazine and pulled the charging handle. She lost track of how many drones she killed, and was aiming for the big ones. The furious witch hefted her mg-34 at the fat bastard shooting it's red beams at the countryside.

“DIE YOU HURENSOHN!”, Kastner shouted at the top of her lungs as she pulled the trigger. The 8mm Mauser rounds tore through the ash-filled air and into the black hexagonal body of the invader. It screamed as the bullets ripped the alien to shred, the vengeful witch could see it's core. Jana ignored common sense, her familiar's brown ears flopping in the sky as she dove towards the wounded beast. She fired the last of her magazine hitting the core at least once, causing it's explosion.

Any suggestions, like how she takes to getting Neurofied (completely brainwashed, aware of what she has become? If the last, does she try to be good or take a new evil persona? Or does she even have any control over it, and can only see what her body has become terrorize the ones she swore to protect?)

Strike Witches Love is Alive and Well!

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Name: Anonymous 2010-11-13 4:13